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Epilog?
Jun 22, 2007 23:29:06 GMT -5
Post by Chaos Creator on Jun 22, 2007 23:29:06 GMT -5
I know I'm being awfully picky here, but as a writer, I just can't let this pass...
An epilogue is at the end of a story. A prologue starts it.
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Jun 23, 2007 10:09:25 GMT -5
Post by Raistlin on Jun 23, 2007 10:09:25 GMT -5
Yeah, I knew that. Chauk that up to 3 hrs of sleep and the urge to finish something for once. lol. I've fixed it though. Thanks.
And yes, I really do know the difference. I've wrote a few mystery stories and when I couldn't think of where to go with the next one I wrote a begining story called "First A Prologue."
I've just gotta get my head into the game better. I rushed that in for the sake of needing something to get things rolling. Now that that's out of the way, how was the story?
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Epilog?
Jun 23, 2007 11:26:14 GMT -5
Post by YungGun on Jun 23, 2007 11:26:14 GMT -5
i enjoyed it. i also liked the fact that you ended the chapter with a question kind of thing. whoever reads it will be thinking "Whats going to happen tommorrow? Is SForce going to get into trouble?"
good job and keep it up. when is the next chapter expected to be ready?
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Jun 23, 2007 12:38:03 GMT -5
Post by Morge on Jun 23, 2007 12:38:03 GMT -5
It looks good. Fun to read and understand for vets of DG, but not complicated for newer members when they show up. I look forward to another. Keep it up!
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Epilog?
Jun 23, 2007 20:55:28 GMT -5
Post by SForce on Jun 23, 2007 20:55:28 GMT -5
i liked it Raist....u got the prolouge down pat, on the money with what was happening definitly ((as Tiber can agree with me on this, thats pretty much what happened, wit all the stuff Raist was sayin in the story that was true and Tiber can agree that just one huge brawl came from the side of me and with the rest of the S&D members...tho im good friends with all of them...))
keep it up Raist, i hope thats a sign of things to come b/c i am very delighted with it
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Epilog?
Jun 23, 2007 21:32:05 GMT -5
Post by Raistlin on Jun 23, 2007 21:32:05 GMT -5
Sweetness. Glad to see I got a handle on it. I'm hopeful that I'll get the first actual chapter posted Tuesday. If nothing gets in the way then it'll be there. Thanks for the props guys. I'll try harder to be on top of things when I post next time.
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Jun 23, 2007 23:17:11 GMT -5
Post by Chaos Creator on Jun 23, 2007 23:17:11 GMT -5
Yeah, I knew that. Chauk that up to 3 hrs of sleep and the urge to finish something for once. lol. I've fixed it though. Thanks. And yes, I really do know the difference. I've wrote a few mystery stories and when I couldn't think of where to go with the next one I wrote a begining story called "First A Prologue." I've just gotta get my head into the game better. I rushed that in for the sake of needing something to get things rolling. Now that that's out of the way, how was the story? Yeah, sorry to be so anal.  |
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Jun 25, 2007 12:36:13 GMT -5
Post by SForce on Jun 25, 2007 12:36:13 GMT -5
lol chaos u bastard!!
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Jun 25, 2007 15:36:10 GMT -5
Post by Raistlin on Jun 25, 2007 15:36:10 GMT -5
np. I was looking for all the corrections I could get. I want this as professional as I can. And Chaos, anal...... nah!!!
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Tiber
Halfling
Son of Darius, Apprentice of Raistlin, Enemy of Izlude
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Epilog?
Jun 26, 2007 21:36:17 GMT -5
Post by Tiber on Jun 26, 2007 21:36:17 GMT -5
A story about S&D with no mention of Darius?  Wha......... just kiddin. I dont want to get beat up like poor ol viperboi lol. But SForce I dont really remember this particular dispute....I think it may have been right before I joined. The only time I remember there being real hostilities was at the end. Not to say I dont believe it happened, but I really dont remember that part lol. probably before I really got involved. And Raist I thought it was pretty good. Kinda confused me in the bar scene....I had no idea who was talking to whom at some points, but other than that its a solid start. |
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Jun 27, 2007 10:02:58 GMT -5
Post by Raistlin on Jun 27, 2007 10:02:58 GMT -5
Since there were 3 people talking I think it would have been better to use names more, but I was pressed for time. I'll add it now, and expect things to pick up in the first chapter. I plan to involve Darius, but not extremely. Just pop in for character appearance.
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Jun 27, 2007 13:03:09 GMT -5
Post by SForce on Jun 27, 2007 13:03:09 GMT -5
hmm i believe u were with Aaron and I when we talked about it, but maybe im thinking someone else im not sure, tho i thought u were in S&D b4 me? oo well not a major factor, but yea that dispute did happen, was kinda a 3 day thing and i was just fed up and all so yea
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Jun 29, 2007 8:34:11 GMT -5
Post by Raistlin on Jun 29, 2007 8:34:11 GMT -5
Well I got kind of a busy schedual, so I hope to get the first actual chapter up in the next week, or so. The only day off I have for the next 2 weeks is the 4th, but that's going to be busy with BBQ and fierworks. I'm a good way through it and have a path in my mind set, but just don't get enough sit down time to finish it. I'll try to do it at work too starting Monday. I would be doing it today, but I forgot to put the file on my jump drive and forgot the drive at home. LOL!!! Man I need to get my head together again.
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Jun 29, 2007 22:35:10 GMT -5
Post by SForce on Jun 29, 2007 22:35:10 GMT -5
hey whenever u can get it done it'll be alrite, its all on ur time remember that, dont go pushin for it, finish anything u gotta do 1st
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Jun 30, 2007 11:54:41 GMT -5
Post by Morge on Jun 30, 2007 11:54:41 GMT -5
WOW!  I like it a lot. I'm eager to see what's coming next. Yeah it is a bit hard to tell who's talking, but that doesn't matter. You can kind of figure it out by the end of the conversation. |
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I like it a lot. I'm eager to see what's coming next. Yeah it is a bit hard to tell who's talking, but that doesn't matter. You can kind of figure it out by the end of the conversation.